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In response to: "Making Dreams Come True - Chapter Four" 1554 days old
by darksarcasm [Member]

All right. Now I'm bugged. WHERE'S CHAPTER 5???? more…

In response to: "Making Dreams Come True - Chapter Four" 1555 days old
by darksarcasm [Member]

Sharanya here....hello, how about chapter 5??? more…

In response to: "Making Dreams Come True - Chapter Four" 1559 days old
by  [Visitor]

This is coming on very well. Keep at it. The Principal clearly has problem. Also the home life of the boys looks set to reveal itself. BTW. My name is Derek and I am an Englishman living in the south of England. If you mean the band Nirvana.. no.. I haven't heard their songs. I am an old rocker n roller... musically speaking lol. more…

In response to: "Making Dreams Come True - Chapter Three" 1560 days old
by lovelee [Visitor]

like the story you have a creavtive mind keep it up more…

In response to: "thanks" 1560 days old
by  [Visitor]

Yes I saw that. Studies are of course vital, but on it's own it is not enough, as we are finding out in the UK. Too many music and art subjects have been squeezed out of school curriculums in favour of vocational subjects. This is a mistake that is hopefully going to be corrected. The ability to express yourself in whatever medium you choose is, more…

In response to: "Making Dreams Come True - Chapter Three" 1560 days old
by  [Visitor]

PS Keep the descriptions going. Paint a picture for the reader. I am keen to learn more about the characters themselves eg the Principal and other key members of the story. more…

In response to: "Making Dreams Come True - Chapter Three" 1560 days old
by  [Visitor]

Hi! Yeah it was. I enjoyed reading Chapter3. You have created a sense of fear an incredulity amongst the boys. What is so wrong with music and writing? What are Jai's father and the Principal so frightened of? its going to be interesting to see where u take this. more…

In response to: "Making Dreams Come True - Chapter Two" 1562 days old
by  [Visitor]

Well don't stop now...it's just getting interesting. Conflict with the Principal. Great possibilites there am sure. One suggestion..how about more emphasis on the description the characters and their surroundings rather than the guitars and the songs. ... just a thought! more…

In response to: "Making Dreams Come True - Chapter One" 1567 days old
by darksarcasm [Member]

Sharanya here...a-ahem....CHAPTER 2???????? more…

In response to: "Check it out!" 1578 days old
by darksarcasm [Member]

Sharanya here! Like I said, the ending was a bit too sudden and gross. It was pretty cool otherwise. more…

In response to: "Hi everybody..." 1629 days old
by darksarcasm [Member]

Hey!

Cool blog. Seriously. But WHERE ARE THE PICTURES?? more…