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In response to:Making Dreams Come True - Chapter Four

Sat, 06 Aug 2005 08:33:06 +0200

All right. Now I'm bugged. WHERE'S CHAPTER 5????

In response to:Making Dreams Come True - Chapter Four

Thu, 04 Aug 2005 15:08:29 +0200

Sharanya here....hello, how about chapter 5???

In response to:Making Dreams Come True - Chapter Four

Sun, 31 Jul 2005 17:07:02 +0200

This is coming on very well. Keep at it. The Principal clearly has problem. Also the home life of the boys looks set to reveal itself. BTW. My name is Derek and I am an Englishman living in the south of England. If you mean the band Nirvana.. no.. I haven't heard their songs. I am an old rocker n roller... musically speaking lol.

In response to:Making Dreams Come True - Chapter Three

Sun, 31 Jul 2005 12:02:04 +0200

like the story you have a creavtive mind keep it up

In response to:thanks

Sun, 31 Jul 2005 11:48:04 +0200

Yes I saw that. Studies are of course vital, but on it's own it is not enough, as we are finding out in the UK. Too many music and art subjects have been squeezed out of school curriculums in favour of vocational subjects. This is a mistake that is hopefully going to be corrected. The ability to express yourself in whatever medium you choose is, I believe, essential in making a complete person. After all we are human beings and not robots..keep writing!

In response to:Making Dreams Come True - Chapter Three

Sun, 31 Jul 2005 11:36:40 +0200

PS Keep the descriptions going. Paint a picture for the reader. I am keen to learn more about the characters themselves eg the Principal and other key members of the story.

In response to:Making Dreams Come True - Chapter Three

Sat, 30 Jul 2005 22:27:24 +0200

Hi! Yeah it was. I enjoyed reading Chapter3. You have created a sense of fear an incredulity amongst the boys. What is so wrong with music and writing? What are Jai's father and the Principal so frightened of? its going to be interesting to see where u take this.

In response to:Making Dreams Come True - Chapter Two

Thu, 28 Jul 2005 16:59:41 +0200

Well don't stop now...it's just getting interesting. Conflict with the Principal. Great possibilites there am sure. One suggestion..how about more emphasis on the description the characters and their surroundings rather than the guitars and the songs. ... just a thought!

In response to:Making Dreams Come True - Chapter One

Sat, 23 Jul 2005 14:29:03 +0200

Sharanya here...a-ahem....CHAPTER 2????????

In response to:Check it out!

Tue, 12 Jul 2005 15:13:28 +0200

Sharanya here! Like I said, the ending was a bit too sudden and gross. It was pretty cool otherwise.

In response to:Hi everybody...

Mon, 23 May 2005 11:09:56 +0200

Hey!

Cool blog. Seriously. But WHERE ARE THE PICTURES??